[离任作者] 【荡神作品】【性奴隶服务公司】（十三）

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1楼大中小发表于 2009-7-19 10:00 显示全部帖子

一直在看你的文没什么好说的你已经有了自己的写法风格
有朋友说连贯性不强也许可以加点和以前章节相呼应的东西吧
打个比方这章可以主角接到纪的电话叮嘱他到这的一些事情或者从调教男口中得到以前他熟悉的女的调教经历……额随便说说
绝对支持楼主~不催~慢慢搞~痴女无敌

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